Saturday, 30 June 2007

Driftin’ Along

to Herbie Hancock’s Driftin’ – written key

Melancholy
Miscellany
Meaningful
Simplicity
Blue vignette
Driftin’ along

Sun shimmering
Rays cascade
Waves collide
As the surf pounds hard
The shoreline’s reach
Dread wreathes the sand
Gold beach
Storm rising
Fills the sky with thunder
Black threads raining down

The clouds ballooning
Threat close and dark
What the sun chooses
Take the night with you
Driftin’ along

Rain, the rain
Pounds the foreshore
Lightning blinds us now
And the sun
The warming sun
Will soon be with us gold.

©2007 Angela J. Elliott

5 comments:

tinkestral said...

hi , all looks good. Talent is their for all to see....
cheer Tk

Angela J Elliott said...

Thanks TK. You should blog too. Gives you the chance to put up your own work and get feedback. Plus you can make new friends too!
A

tinkestral said...
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tinkestral said...

I dont think it would work me doing a blog . Where would i start. I miss the group thing. Argie posted a link for here for you. He is also a member of another group.
I still say you are a valuable part of any group because it is so easy to here that you have talent and experience and it would be nice for you to pass it on.
I will definately be looking in here often. Tk

tinkestral said...

hi there, thought what you did at the dome was great. I am definately looking to doing the blog thing. I would like to keep in contact with you as i could use your opinion on stuff, plus i do value your opinion.
Cheers Tk
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